写5次作文能有3次我觉得自己写的不比范文差，但是25分的作文他只给我19分。。。
有一次我的作文写的和范文相似度至少40%，好几个句子几乎一样的，结果才给我18分。。。 100字……………唉{:18:}
上個星期英語作文考試才吐了250字 看到7楼我哭了。。。1300字的论文我才拿了50多分，还是别帮LZ倒忙好了
话说考试中你是怎么发出的帖子。。。考官都是瞎子？ {:ml36:}25分的作文写14分的我还是去学习吧 楼主已跪
目测12分
25满分。
高三小测验而已
一个月总有那么几天 闲散人也 发表于 2014-4-28 21:37
Je suis contente que tu ai.2014.6.9 lundi matin, point 11 à John McDonald Park une fois par The Alp ...
这是法语吗！你为何这么叼…… 本帖最后由 凤凰院凶真 于 2014-4-29 00:57 编辑
Dear peter:
Hi~How are you?
This is Li hua.
I hear that there wiil be a volunteer activity held by the ABCs of volunteering for collecting trash in Monday morning June 2014 at the john McDonald park. The ABCs of volunteering is an organization devoting（devoted） to environment over last five years. The activity is to call upon everyone to contribute their efforts to protecting(我記得這裡是v+ing形式） the earth. I think these（this） kind of acitivities have many benifits, like enjoying new experience, meeting new friends, etc. So I hope to invite you to join with me together. If you are interested, please give me a response.
Have a good day!
Li hua.
本帖最后由 koishisatori 于 2014-4-28 10:48 编辑
凤凰院凶真 发表于 2014-4-28 09:27 static/image/common/back.gif
Dear peter:
Hi~How are you?
This is Li hua.
Dear peter:
Hi~How are you?
This is Li hua.看题目是熟人，熟人说话就不要这个了
I hear that there wiil be a volunteer activity held by the ABCs of volunteering for collecting trash in on Monday morning June (9th) 2014 at the john McDonald（蓝蓝路！） park. The ABCs of volunteering is an organization devoting（devoted） to environment over last five years. The activity is to call upon everyone to contribute their efforts to protecting(我記得這裡是v+ing形式） the earth. I think these（this） kind of acitivities have many benifits, like such as enjoying new experience, meeting new friends, etc. So I hopewant to invite you to join with me togetherthis event with me. If you are interested, please give me a response.I am looking forward to your reply.
Have a good day!
Sincerely yours(这个可以有)
Li hua.
随便改了一下觉得可以改进的地方
干得好！
但是
It's too late ~ 骚年，还是自己努力吧
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