【喵玉汉化_1047】I do
作者:米泥棒社團:ふあん亭
發售日:2014.05.11(例大祭11)
圖源、掃本:卯月
翻譯:卯月
校對、潤色:井鬼
改圖:卯月
不安亭的《I do》以及不久後將發表的另一個櫻庭友紀的秦心本漢化,就單篇故事完結來說,是我讀過目前最優秀的秦心角色本。分別一剛一柔,執念與解放,反省與成長…可以說在短短二年多就出現如此高質的角色本,再搭上戀這位繼紅妖永風後跑出的人氣王,秦心這角色的前途著實無可限量…所以先悄悄預告一下…接下來還有至少四本秦心本要發表,其中兩本當然也是LETRA的秦心系列本
回到正題,《I do》這一本比起上次的《想起之途》相信更為易於理解的一本,也就不獻醜解說了。由於目睹了戀的無意識之舞而被震懾的心,渴望超越戀而憑著執念完成革新的舞,卻沒想到戀是因欣賞她的舞而跳起這種舞。
還回來,我的舞、我的本能,我的希望之面──
在這一本中總給我一種感覺,之於心,戀就像她宿命中的某個人,總是反覆奪去她重要的東西。而心總是追著戀的身影,追著這個虛無飄渺轉眼即逝的身影跑,渴望超越、渴望奪回些什麼。然而,不管是心的舞、心的本能,乃至「希望」…那是否真的被戀所奪去呢?
那麼,就下次再來取回去吧──
對於秦心的譴責,戀僅是一如既往的輕描淡寫,隨即便消失在秦心的視線中(無意識能力)。只是我寧可相信,戀的回答並非展示出她的不在乎。
在《I do》整整三十頁下來,有兩個地方曾觸動過我──
第一幕是秦心不甘地哭訴戀總是奪走她重要的東西;
而第二幕則是全篇的最後一頁,最後兩格,當悄悄讓心錯開了自己的身影後,負傷的戀靜靜微笑,拋下那句「下次要好好來領舞哦」轉身離去之際,我忽然不曉得要如何定這本子了,是黑本?還是劇情系治癒本之類?
或者只能說,這就是不安亭特色的作品──銳利的心理描寫、富黑色幽默的分鏡情節、籠罩著不安的故事發展,以及,那一點點稍不留神便會擦身而過的暖意。
校對的RH前輩每次都好長一篇讀後感壓力好大。個人感覺 這是個溫馨的小故事 欺負平緩。 秦心的隨心之舞 讓戀無意識地跳出了隨意之舞。 心之所現,比不上潛意識更接近於本音,所以比起戀,心的舞蹈就如同上了一層枷鎖,顯得不那麼自由,不那麼自然了吧。本篇中的戀,較上一篇不安亭的作品《想起之途》中的戀,可以說有所成長,也可以說一塵不變。自然而然,追尋着自我的樂趣,也多少有些掛心在意著的人
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这本……该说很黑么,还是说黑中有点其它的味道?
反正……不能个别的定性了 不安亭要不就是掉节操,要不就是..................