看不见今晚的星光
本帖最后由 frogsnake 于 2015-4-5 23:24 编辑卖!卖!卖!卖!卖不出去！一群异教徒明明连我大东方都不知道你买又不买还围着我的摊位干什么！
与其卖给那些不明不白的家伙不如拿来跟自己人分享要好。
如果对话文本看起来很怪，那是我弟的杰作我迟早要剁了他。(2015年4月5号改成电子版了)
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本帖最后由 frogsnake 于 2015-4-5 23:23 编辑
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图片太大呢，卡了一段时间
个人制作的本子真的太棒了！已右键收藏了！
灵梦的心和眼睛都在滴血么……总觉得可以出更黑化的续集了……% 好用心的作品啊，卖不出去无所谓啦
第一次卖作品，不会有太多人了解，如果不刻意去做宣传工作的话，能不能大卖只能完全靠运气啦~卖不出去不是你的水平问题~也不是作品的质量问题~~运气不好而已~
看完了，很棒的作品啊...內容上甚至贏過很多專業的本子
不應該賣不出去的
我猜或許是封面太簡略了一點，無法呈現出內容精彩的萬一吧 嗯關於賣本子想說的上面基本都有說過了233
總之不要灰心喔繼續加油練習提高自己的功力，之後加以宣傳一定沒問題的
看完下來感覺小故事相當不錯噢，能看出是很用心在思考劇情在畫的作品，對人物的心理刻畫也很棒很細膩，沒有著急趕工的感覺，每一P都很仔細呢
心疼靈夢555
還有想說一點就是字體和對話框的設置可以多參考下其他漫畫，感覺字體稍微大了點比較散233
其他都很棒！請繼續加油啊好期待新的作品！
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