【喵玉汉化_1493】晦冥的觉 上
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晦冥のさとり
东方红楼梦 2013/10/13 鉄吾レイ（鉄戦車隊） 2251673 Iron_a_REI
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图源：hgs1220
扫图：八云幽紫
翻译：正直的小A
文校：大湿
改图：着火的烤炉
图校：hgs1220
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晦冥的觉上下2本，均已完成。改图花了不小精力，下一帖会写上h的感想的，这里请容我来说说。
相比多数轻量级的本而言，这本的故事叙事更完整，毕竟合计92页(42p & 50p)
但是遗憾的也是，个人感觉故事的精彩程度略对不起这92页的厚度，冲突的进展太过迅速，以至于描写不够充分
但是叙事的安排是挺精巧的，举例来说：以帕露和红白对阵为始，也以两人相互理解为终，相同的台词，反复读来掷地有声
而就改图的难度而言，上半和下半真是有着天壤之别（大倒苦水:作者你吔屎啦
另外，这本作者在文本上很良心，全都标注了假名读音，熟练之后乃可朗读w
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