【喵玉汉化_1534】砂上的楼阁
本帖最后由 mArK890 于 2016-6-9 11:15 编辑标题：砂上の楼閣（サジョウノロウカク）
社团：あみだ屑
作者：佐野さのこ
Pixiv：www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=441353
发布展会：C89
发布时间：2015/12/30
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翻译：东国
改图：着火的烤炉
图校：hgs1220
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砂上的楼阁：形容无法长久维持的事物，就像建在沙基上的高楼，岌岌可危。
羿：史上记载羿有二人，帝尧时期的大羿，以及夏朝太康时期有穷氏羿。前者记载于传说，妻姮娥；后者被经纯狐诱导的寒浞(zhuo)所杀。
因为zun混淆了2人，所以纯狐变成了大羿的妻子。（接下来，反白很有用。微剧透
预言的水盆：
1.核心的壶里容纳大量憎恶，将禄苏秽杀（真·脏死了）。赫卡提娅通过禄苏之尸，以壶的污秽为力量被召唤而来。
2.大羿畏惧，将一切水盆预言所指的人物尽数捕杀了。
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38p的容量，要说的话，剧情有失水准（sorryあみだ屑）。中段开始，故事颇有种无脑胡编的感觉，节奏突然拉快，导致整个剧本虎头蛇尾，让人感觉莫名其妙的，读罢，徒余兴味索然。
据h所言，要是不论月都的设定的话，本篇中士兵的（就是那些画风突变的小兵）盔甲和羿所在的时代完全不符。——by 燐：照着秦俑画的？纯狐当时没有这种甲的…功课没做好啊（笑