魔爱的深夜探险

无敌的蟑螂

其实原本是英语老师让我们以一个比较阴暗的楼梯为题材写一篇100字左右的小故事（这尼玛还100字！？）写出这么一篇东西来连我自己都佩服自己英语渣渣还望各位英语帝不要见笑，嘴炮留情
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猎狐者小麦

咏唱是要复兴了吗?壮哉,我大咏唱!
虽然是100(!?)字的英语作文,但只要有爱就算是英语作文也没关系对吧

匿名的简化字

虽然不是老师但是还是想说……
语法错误确实多了点……

The night has fallen. Alice walked on the stairway where just some dilapidated light was shining. "Marisa, when I come back I'll surely kill you!" She said with trembling。
Back to one hour ago...
“Let's look for the ghost!” yelled Marisa when she opened the door of Alice's home.
"What?" Alice got shock and stopped making dolls which she loved.
"I mean looking for the ghost! The ghost is a good material for magic!" Said Marisa, who is also a magican as Alice.
"I'm busy now." Alice said coldly.
"Don't always stay at home! Let's go outside together!" With these words Marisa caught Alice's arm and tried to pull her out.
"What? Wait, Marisa!"Alice yelled, but Marisa had been taking her for a flight.

"That is... a castle?" said Alice.
"I found it yesterday. It seems that something lives in it, doesn't it?" Marisa said with a smile.
They went into the castle and found a cold, wet and long stairway to underground.
"I, I think we shouldn't get down more." Alice shivered.
Suddenly something white came out for the other end of the stairway.
"Ahhhh!!" Alice was terribly shocked, while Marisa looks more excited.
"HAHA! I find it!" Marisa flew ahead to pursue the ghost.
"Wait, Marisa!" Now Alice is alone. She Walked slowl and carefully. "I'm not afrad, nor scared." She said softly.
After ten minutes, she saw three roads. She yield, thinking which way to choose。
At this moment, something slap by her shoulder.
"Ahhhhhh!!!" Alice got shocked once again.
"Hey, Alice, It's me, Marisa!"
Alice opened her eyes. when she saw marisa was smiling, she finally cried out.
"I'm sorry, Alice. Next time I'll not throw it to you."
"Never one more time again!" Alice shouted.
"Me too, not again." It's another girl's voice, behind Marisa's back.
"Youmu? Why are you here?" asked Alice. Youmu was a female swordsman. She had a ghost which always at her side. In fact, the ghost was a part of her.
"I was drilling there when she suddenly attacked me. Fortunately my reaction is fast."
"Sorry, I thought you were the ghost." Said Marisa.
"Half of me is not ghost!" Youmu said unhappily.
"So why your ghost went out and scared us?" asked Alice, "It's late at night!"
"My ghost never leave me today."
"What?" Alice was in silence and her face turned pale.
"I said it never leave me today. we drill together." Said Youmu.
"It's intersting! Let's go down one more time!" Said Marisa, with light in her eyes.
"You dimwit!" Alice shouted and flew away.
"Why she was so scared?" Said Youmu.
"Who Knows?" Marisa shrugged.


好了我默默地右上角去……

soapie

表示想要吐槽英语的冲动压倒性地胜过了读下去的想法，抱歉了。
不过感觉楼主翻译成英文之前的脑内中文版或许会还不错？不写出来看看吗~

megatuzi

咱在期待插图会乱说→ →

阿Yeah

猎狐者小麦 发表于 2013-3-1 04:21
咏唱是要复兴了吗?壮哉,我大咏唱!
虽然是100(!?)字的英语作文,但只要有爱就算是英语作文也没关系对 ...

咏唱组还需要复习么?早就头顶青天了

奇琴伊察

表示并不擅长英语，考试基本凭直觉的