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嗯…………这是我第一次使用英文写出超过至少1000单词的文章，理由是战争类的东西我更擅长英文表达，但是自己的语言还是有缺陷，这点在中文和英文里都有，对动作和景色描写很不给力，所以更喜欢对话之类的东西。
这篇东西话（不敢用文章），属于算是自己另外一篇坑着的文章中时间线往前推的作品（那篇是中文，大概9W字多吧~），写这个原因实际上很简单，因为自己要刷六级了，写点东西练练手。（六级作文字数又抄了………… ）
不知道多少个单词，但是字符数有17660个，字数（WORD统计）：4046. 至少可以当作作文交上去了…………
注：FAE，全称 Fuel Air Explosive 一般中文名称翻译为云爆弹，是现今常规武器（非核武，非生化武器，非新概念武器）破坏力同规格下最强的炸弹。通过在空气中制造二次爆炸，来产生巨大的冲击波并急速消耗空气中的氧气，让即使是躲在非封闭掩体内的有生单位也会因为氧气消耗而窒息死亡。
Utopia, 乌托邦，托马斯·摩尔爵士提出的一种理想社会。
Thermal scope:热成像瞄准镜，通过接收目标（一般是人）身上的红外射线来识别目标的一种瞄准镜，在雾气和夜间能取代光学瞄准镜作为狙击枪的上的准镜。由于是红外射线，所以对热源，也就是人等恒温动物，战车（发动机热源）有很好的识别效果。
HQ,head quarters 总部，应用于军队里更多些。
Simith-Weson 史密斯-韦森， 很有名的枪械品牌，精于微型和左轮手枪，属于PDW类型（Personal Defending Weaponry个人防御型武器。）
A,T,C,G,S。因为我不喜欢书写英文名字，而且一个名字恐怕代表不了什么，所以我一直用字母来代替人物名称。
Capt. captain. 队长，相当于上尉。
Sgt. Sergeant . 军士，相当于上士。
Cpl. Corpal 下士
Major: 少校
XM-78:没有这东西，XM-38自动步枪我换了下编号，同理 Mk-III, 现在有Mk-II型自动榴弹发射器。
Javelin: “标枪”反装甲导弹，一般攻击战车和坦克的炮塔顶部部位，所以反战车非常有效。
“Incoming!Artillery smash!” Well it’s another slight earthquake to us. Stay inside thisBanker-like apartment is the safest place all around this battlefield, withmore than 1000mm steel and concretewalls and enough ammo and fuel supply, but unfortunately one thing, we won’thave any backup.
“The HQ wantus to get this building under controlled!” The voice of the major still boundsin my brain,”Once we finished, you will be sent home!” Home, a fantastic wordonly in fiction, sounds like heaven to everyone in this damned war. I don’tknow why this happened and I can’t get a clear idea how it works, my eves aretotally blind to everything except blood, death, bullet and KILLING.
“Enemies’ repopping smoke! Get to the thermals!” ”Roger!” It’s just another assault,another slaughter. But we will run out sooner or later, our backup was ambushedby a task-force team and have given up the artillery assistance and air supplyto us. We are abandoned.
“Multipletargets with BTRs, take them Donw! “ “Get an AT-5!” Armored car is only armoredcar, they cannot math the tanks. Besides firing its 20mm fast gun and serve as the cover for the troops,its fire power can only hit through several minimeters of steels, causeignorable injuries to tanks and bankers. “Get to the 120mm! we have fast 120mm company!” “Yeah!” dozens of soldiers about 25 to30 are commanded to hold this building to their last stand, and I am one ofthem. “S! Vanish these armors!” ”Yes sir!” I picked up an AT-5,” Ardio SamigoBABY~” Just in a glimpse of an eye, fire blast to the grey sky. “One down!”Then this building shakes like a jeep crossing the hills and slopes. “Shit!Someone get to the 120mms! G, get to the 120mmASAP, they are trying to tear this building apart!” “I’m trying! We don’t have radarto locate its position!” G cried. “Then get to the Javelin Damn it!” Captain L’svoice is almost not heard. Then I heard the sound of the Metal breaking. “Yeah~your son of the bitches!” G’s laughing upstairs.
I turn to thesniper rifles, “Wanna a race again?” A asks. “Right on time.”
This is not assassin’sjob, no silencer and no shelter’s required, this building is the best shelterand the fire cracks are our silencer. With the help of thermals, sniping hasbecome a game of slaughter.”One down!” “I got one!” “ Tango down” “Nail one!”
“Hey, how manyyou get?” I said, “25” “30.”Asmiles. “Well, you won.” Battle only last couple of minutes. “So how long willwe stay in this apartment? Is back up real?”A asked. “Fuck that reinforcements!”G drop his knife on the ground with a tiring look. “You know Nothing about theHQ, our country! They treat us since we are born, and when this all happened,we were told to liberate the ohers and were sent here for killing peoples, botharmed and bear hands. I had that enough!” C said. “Shut the fuck up! C” Capt. Lshows up. “Now speak of anything is useless! Yes, THE rescue will come in theend, only if we hold this building enough time!” ”Rescue? Ha, what a amusingJoke! You still believe the HQ? They promised to let us free off war forcountless times, and which promise become the real?”C said,”look around us,see? A, he has been sent to the enemy’s rear for multiple times, has cheat thedeath in all ways, meanwhile his team members are all gone! But he still cannotearn his rest! Just a rest in home for a month, a week, even a day! Then take alook at our Sgt S and G, they fought through the blood and fire and the deadfrom the break of war until now. Have Met both the Satan and Jesus. So whatdoes he get? He lost his Sergeant, and our Sergeant K! We are believed in one,even the Azrael tremble before us. Now he was in heaven or hell anywhere helike but leave us all alone in this cursed, hopeless hell-like places?” “OKenough talk, we will say about that later. C ”I stand up, “now, we are facing amoment quite familiar to the past. We are surrounded but remember the time whenwe are trapped? Our existence is the best proof on the hope. Though it is thesame old words, hold on my friends!”“All right everyone, discussion finished, Sergeants, get to your team andprepare for the next raid. Dismissed! ” Capt. L’s order.
“C, come overhere.” I wave to him. “Sir, if you are goanna blame me, I accept!” C speaksfirmly. “No, I cannot ill-treat you, all of you. Team Delta, regroup. We haveto make sure our job is done. ”I have to assign the defense mission to mybrothers, hoping not to be killed in a sudden. “All right, this is it. Holdyour positions and stay sharp.”
“C, thanks.You know what, I would like to sent you back if have such power. You, A and Thas suffered enough from this damned warfare.” I call C to my side. “You areyoung and full of activity, not like me, like Sgt K, old, and useless withoutfighting.” “No, Sgt K, you and G shall earn the rest, It is your effort to drawthe enemy’s attention, thus making it possible for us to flank the rear.” “Youdon’t know, C. G and I have cheated the death for too much time. I oncebelieved that the Azrael were gone, at least in Team Delta, Sgt K, G, A, T, Cand I are undefeatable and untouchable. Though I held the fear to Azrael, buttime flies, I forgot his existence. Now he has shown his mighty. Sgt K hasgone, gone in the latest artillery strike, you still remember him right?” Isigned.” Yeah. Can’t get his voices out my heads, he was real, never vanishedfrom my memory. ” “En. He was alive still, I believe. Maybe its time for me tomeet the death as I have faced countless times. Low probability cannot alwayshappen on a certain object. A, I need to say something to you.” I feel the coldfinger of the Satan, and I have to permit my brothers will stand until the endof war. “Just say it. We are not so different, facing the dead every day.” A isobserving the thermal scope on his sniping rifle. “Once I am down, You take thelead of this team and preserve them with your best try. Sgt K will be happy Ithink..” “Well, I agree with what your said and take it as an order. But Istill wish we can make it together right?” “I hope so, I hope so. Now everyoneback to position. The night assault will arrive sooner or later.”
Nights fallsalways quite fast, claiming the moment of another fierce attack on us. ThoughCapt. L has confirmed the reinforcements will come but cannot get an exact ETA.“This time, maybe we are down. Baby, how many we can kill before I am killed?”I sweep my XM-78 automatic rifle, which has been used for years.
“The warcrycomes only from the ancient instinct of humanity.” A voice float beside myears. Gun immediately point to the sound source. In that place, I see a blonde girlwith bear hands. “Who are you?!” Their should not be any other personelsshowing his appearance here. “War is the only way to release the fire ofslaughtering in humanity. Humans has created multiple ways to resist the beastof their own heart, but once the beasts arises, nothing can stop him.” Thisgirl keeps speaking. “Hey, I am asking you who you are! Do you hear me!”Strange, She looks no like civilians nor the soldiers. Carefully, I try toapproach her by moving tiny steps towards her. “Utopia, a heaven once in yourimagination, once you are chasing after, a world of no pain, sorrow, fear andanger. But you forget one thing, that sorrow, pain, fear and anger are elementsof humanity and will follows down as you passed to the descendents. ” This girlkeeps numbering words!! “Last warning! Tell me WHO YOU ARE! Or I’m goanna fire!”I make the gun directly at her head, right between the eyebrows. “Now it’s theturn of these negative side of your heart to express, to speak, to act. And thisis the true cause of this war.” “BANG” the sound of gun powder bounding aroundthe building.
“Who shoot?”In a second, peoples all rushed up to me. “What happened?!” A asked,” Theassault begins ?” “No, something wired again.” I said. The girls faces cannotmoved away from my eye. “Remember the strange girl in an abandoned buildingbefore we step inside the hot zone, A? ”I returned to the room with A and asks. “Yeah ,that’s really strange thing. Youstill have the paper she left, all words are Japanese, right?” “Yes, I stillhave it. It’s only about belief in Fiction. At least I treat it as a joke.” Ipicked up my sniper rifle, A and I are the first turn to stand guardiansagainst the enemy assault. “She’s a myth. Both the face and wearing are notreal. Her weapon, Smith-Weson .38 mini handgun can provide limited defense onher survival in the battlefield. And you said she’s bear hands this time?”A isconfused.”Yes, I am quite sure. She just speaks difficult but meaningless wordsto me and ignore all my talks. So I opened fire to her, again.”
“But her hat,her moves, her Faces, her clothes makes me remind of someone, a image long timeago. “ I slowly said.
“What? Youknew her already?”A got a little surprised
“Yes, but onlyin fiction, it’s not real.” I said. This blonde hair, purple dress, and thespecial white goffered with a bowknot in front of it. This smile, I saw quiteoften on TVs, PC and images in the past. I hide this memory of a maniac addictin a big thing which break into fragments once the peace were interrupted. Mylanguage, my picture, my works, all gone by the tank trenches rolling roughlyon the roads and streets.
This is notreal, I once prayed, but the bullet has shot in my love’s head, and she’s gonein a blink of an eye. Vengeance, hatreds and bloodlust steamed up my body. Iwanted a revenge, to heal the scar in my heart. Now, countless lives are away,both my brothers and the enemy. The reason is vague. We, not I are onlyfighting for survive. I don’t know what to stop this war since I am only a soldier.
“Utopia, Thereonce is one, I know. In a world we can only see, but have no access to step in.”I call back my deep buried thoughts, a world created by a man, than wascompleted by the lovers like me. Anyway, it’s still a fiction. A fiction comfortus to some extent.
“Humans willmeet another rebirth and the old will be vanished.” The sound comes again. “Shit!A ,she’s here!” I jumped up.”OH SHIT, this time is sound only….” “All right S,I think you need a rest. I didn’t hear anything or any sound.” A shakes hishead with a pity look. “What, you didn’t hear her?!” I was shocked, ”She spokeso loudly, It cannot be missed!” “No my friend, I can only hear the battlingfar away and your sudden action. You need to clear up your mind first.” A said.
“How can thathappen? It’s really some mirror image and voice?”
“No, he cannothear me.” Directly in my brain, she speaks. “Who are you? You sound like justin my mind only, I must be insane.” No one, no one can invade a person’s mind.But somehow, she succeeded. “No mind can be interfered and controlled once theweakness is discovered.” “That’s abnormal! If the military know this thingreally exists, they will take every means developing the mind control device.” “Well,because you consider it abnormal, that’s the reason why you cannot develop suchweaponry. ” Yes, she is the one I am quite familiar with, the style ofspeaking, the smile. “You, I know you, but you should be only living in the flatworld, only a image.” “Well anyway you think. Humans want a Utopia but do not believeit. They chase happiness but do not realize the nature of true happiness. Theywish a peace life, but they break the wish by shooting bullets to others. Theycreate the rules, intend to rule the nature, without the awareness of they arethe puppet of the grand nature. ” “These words, I have heard so much times thatI can even continue your talk, but a person’s strength is too tiny.” “No, youwill never realize how strong a human’s belief is, yongman. You once deeplyfall inside the world of ours, maybe it’s time to let you in again. Only if youhave hopes.” “Hm~~Whatever you say. A world where ghosts, spirits, hunmans,vampires and other fiction fairies live together? Utopia, it’s are the same.”
“Well, we willmeet again.” She disappeared like a ghost, with another piece of paper left inmy hand.
Utopia, comes onlyfrom beliefs. See you again.
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“S, we havecompany!” I am about to be absent minded, A pull me back to the reality.
“Thanks man,status?” I quickly focus my eye on the scope.
“The scale islarger than in the day time. You see them right?”
“Yeah, I getthem in my scope, but out of my range.” Hundreds of personels matching up,seems to using the number strategy
“Me either.Capt. L must saw those guys, call everyone else!”
“Team Delta,standby and fight!”A blow a low voice.
“Roger!”
“Time tokilling again!” G stenches his arms.
“Every one getinto battle station, do not fire until the first frag grenade bang! G, it’s onyours!”
“Ok, leave itto me!” G step on the Mk-III auto grenade launcher, he always love the massive destructionweapon.
“OK, standby,standby, standby …….Right.”
“BOOM!” I havea white spot on my thermal scope, and several figure lied down to ground, noother movements.
“Open fire!!!!”Another battle is on now.
“Wanna a raceagain?” A challenge again.
“Come on! Let’sdo it!” I pull up the switch. One white figure falls down.
The wholebuilding has wake up and spread the wrath to anyone who dare to take a stepcloser. Capt. L is in crazy mode again, in fact, the whole of us have gone mad.Days of firing and shooting, despair, fear and depression. No music, no songs,no artworks and no poems, mud, dust and Darkness, killing is the only way torelax, though face the risk of getting killed.
“Yeah~ That’sone of it! Damn! Armo again! G, eliminate them!” Large white spot moving slowlyup in my scope, like a ghost flying unstably in the air. “I have them!” Themwith a flash, they stop moving, the white flame is only the fantastic image inthe night.
With thedestruction of their tanks, the dash has ceased. The silence of the dead nowfalls upon the whole area.
“Don’t letyour Guard down! Another hit is on the way!”
“Damn! Artillerysmash!! Get off the gun pots! G, get off that Mk-III!! “ The cannon’s shakingin my brain, staying on the battlefield for a long time, anyone will besensitive to cannon fire.
“Incoming!!!”Just a little shaking up our head. “Wait a minute!” I sense somethingunusual,the sound seems too slight, compared with normal shells. “A smallcloud?” I watched through my scope, then suddenly understand what will happennext, in a horror. “Oh shit! FAE!! FAE!! Leave the room now!!”
“Everyone gonow!! I say go!!” I have to be the last, as Sgt. K did to us. The FAE explodeswith large consumption of oxygen in the air thus result in shockwave and choketo men on battlefield either in room or outdoor.
Another boom! Right before I step the first feet to the door.Building’s shaking like under siege by level-9 earthquakes, I am thrown backwith great force and have no other chance to escape as I cannot breath anymore.My lung’s bleeding, all my blood has go in wrong direction, then myconcentration, my mind…………………….
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“The beastwill never stop hunting, killing, it’s just too late to leash on him.” Oh, notagain, I never think a human can speak after his death.
“You are notdead, just unconscious only. Now, good to see you again.” You, it’s you. Yes, Isee, I am a dead man now, cannot see, smell, hear and touch anything, but canfeel the words of a ghost.
“Well, youwill see my face once again, but not now. Welcome to Utopia.” Well, I’m inheaven certainly, good to know Satan didn’t show up.
“BI-------” OHMAN, radios, I hate hearing that, my ears suffered too much since I put on myuniform. “Sgt S? Sgt S?! where are you! Talk to me!” a, it’s A, sorry pal, It’sup to you to lead Delta. “No reply, Damn it! S, where the hell are you!No, I’mgoing to save him!” “G, come back, any place connect to the outside is deadzone! Oxygen has been drained up BY FAES!”….. “Then leave him all alone? Damnit, let me out!!” ”No, someone stop him!” Thanks G, but it’s no more needed.Oh, another wave crackers. “This is Kill-box 17, we have retake control of thesky upon Delta zone. Ground Reinforcements ETA in 5:00.” …………….“ This is 7tharmor division ‘warlord’, thanks for holding the line, we are now sweep up. ”………………..”We’vescanned every corner but still cannot find him, even his body!”……………….”Thelatest news, ‘Team of the Azreal’ former carpal and leader Sgt S has reportedas M.I.A. in the ’Tiger-Banker’ Apartment defending. Battle……………This team has fought through bloodand fire and was the first team capturing the building and holding the line formore than a week without any ground or air support………All team members have wonthe medal of honor and return back as heroes.”……………….”They use FAEs to mop awayall the ground resistance ignoring the friendly inside, we suffered heavylosses,T and C are all died of choke, only G and I survived. But the HQ justcovered up everything. I am a soldier, so I cannot disobey the rules. But I wllhave my own ways to complete the revenge. S, maybe I will meet you soon.” That’sthe voice of A! No, the FAE are fired from our back? But I cannot do anythingabout that. Sorry, we are soldiers, it’s our nature to obey the order withoutquestion………………..
Well, this feeling is flying away. Let’s see who will come next,Satan or Jesus?
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“U ah….Cough!oh….mygod!” I wake up with my brain and mind back online. “Am I dead already?!” Itake a deep breath of the air. Well, still in one piece. It was suppose tochoke to death by the FAE, ironically all my part of body are stillfunctioning.
“I shall besupposed to meet the Utopia or heaven man. But look at you, where the hell doyou sent me to.” This place, seems to like inside a mountain, full of tinywater drops which means this place is totally wet.
“Hope the XM-83 don’t go down!” I scratch my hand to mywaist. “Man, where’s my rifle?! Oh shit who changed my clothes?! The uniform’smissing!” Well, I am wondering weather I am dead or alive now. If I am dead,then why I can see, can hear, can touch and can feel. My body is here, so is mymind, my skill, my instinct of fighting. Otherwise if I am alive, then who canexplain changes on me? Uniforms have been exchanged with raincoats forcross-country sports, my rifle is lost, nor with my helmet, my radio, my mags,my grenades. This isn’t a jail, as I cannot feel any sigh of human activity andno boundary or barrier in my sight.
“I need tocheck my gear now.” The bag pack has turn into a nor bag with nothing inside.And the only thing comfort me is my knife, sticking to my legs shining itscold, silver light. “Anyway, I have a weapon at least.”
The fog almostremain stable, giving a person a kind of depression. Well, exploring aroundwill be better. Hope no enemy movements here.
A few minuteslater, I reach a structure, in fact, there is only on road for me to walk. Thiswooden structure must have years, though I cannot see it clearly as the visibilityis strictly limited by the thick fog. By the outline I am able to judge thisstructure is ancient style, similar to some building before war when I was traveling.
“No sigh ofany movement. Proceed with cautions.” Knife in my hand, I walk in battlestation to approach that wooden building. But they are not here, Delta team hasgone. No more existence and traces. I am totally all alone now.
“What a fool,the only living person is me now.” After scanning the whole structure, I’veconfirmed the fact that I am the only human being in this place and figure outthe basic situation I have got in.
I am in an ancientwooden independent house equipped with one floor only. No facilities, no roomdivisions and no sigh of humans. Because of the water, woods has already becomerotten and on whicn are growing moss. House is about 10 metro long, 5 meterswide and 3 meters high, with a entrance without a door. The style seems to beJapanese as the back access is sliding doors. This place is not good, but farmore better than outside because a shelter is a shelter, no matter how bad itis.
The Guardiansis a trouble, set up some alarming traps can only hold on for a very limitedtime for me to react. Once encountered with any heat weapons, this house willbe my grave. Whatever, I have to defend alone.
This buildinglies deeply inside the mountains, thus providing plenty of woods and grass,surviving skills is the basic class for a soldier. Thanks to my knife, trap hasbeen done.
“But, cananyone tell me where the hell is here?” The world is on fire, filled with humanweapons and death. Peace went extinct a long time ago, but now I am standinginside a place out of warfare.
“Maybe the air have some elements inside, causing me dizzy.” My mindbecome unstable again, I won’t beg for a third time to finish thisuncomfortable experience. Just like Silent Hill, I am in a world that rulescannot be detected and managed. Before I totally lost my mind, I put my knifeon my chest. If there is a kind of death, this style is better……………..
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Radio:
“Now come in the latest news,the Former member of the Team of Death, now known as Eagle Eye Major A wasdiscovered dead in dining room of his house 1 hour before. The police has announced it’s only asuicide and denied to speak any further information. And another news, the Commanderof the 1st military army, General J was assassinated by a unknownperson. The murderer is still on the run. The police confirmed the weapon was aSimith-Weson 0.38 pistol. And the bullet just right hit into the place betweenhis eyebrows. The assassination occurred in the time when General was observinghis troops and caught shot from at least 100meters away. The police believethere is a well-trained sniper sneak into the country and promise to find outin ten days.”
渣级别，渣创作，渣英文，总之是个渣了………….JPG)
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发表于 2011-12-18 14:57:23
染红的潜规则
帝爷的潜规则
变色卡
发表于 2011-12-18 16:53:57
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各种枪支弹药都不认识